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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. That last chapter was a bit too long but so awesome. The lemon and sex was amazing, probably the best I have seen so far. Please keep it up!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, and you hardly need to worry about your lemon-writing. When you said you found them hard to write, I sure as hell wasn't expecting a 5000-word scene...! You're better at it than most of the people on this site -- keep up the good work.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want...
MOAAAAAAAAAAAR!
MOAAAAAAAAAAAR!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well done, hard to think of words to describe this story. hope you continue to put in lemon moments in the future. thanks for a very wonderfull read.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, the lemony goodness! Dangerous writing, there! Now, who will Harry add next? Maybe Padma & Parvati, as a team (though you have to watch out for twincest!)?
All in all, a very good chapter! Thanks much!
All in all, a very good chapter! Thanks much!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm afraid I can't give you a review as long as last time without repeating myself but I''ll have to do that to a certain extent.
Yet again you got the balance of sex and plot just right, with great descriptions all the way through.
More sky punching moments in Dumbledore's office (you really don't like him do you) and plenty more suspence.
Just a couple of things to comment badly on.
1. Are Dumbledore, Hermione and Ron going to be kicked at and down graded in every single chapter, they are suposed to be the good guys you know.
2. This one is a request, can you place the French translations next to the actually French, say in square brackets [] as otherwise you have to scroll to the bottom of the screen everytime Fleur speaks.
Those were the only things, excellent work yet again and please right faster, these stories are the only thing that make my life bearable
Adam
Yet again you got the balance of sex and plot just right, with great descriptions all the way through.
More sky punching moments in Dumbledore's office (you really don't like him do you) and plenty more suspence.
Just a couple of things to comment badly on.
1. Are Dumbledore, Hermione and Ron going to be kicked at and down graded in every single chapter, they are suposed to be the good guys you know.
2. This one is a request, can you place the French translations next to the actually French, say in square brackets [] as otherwise you have to scroll to the bottom of the screen everytime Fleur speaks.
Those were the only things, excellent work yet again and please right faster, these stories are the only thing that make my life bearable
Adam
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Susan
Hannah
Su Li
Tracy Davis
Blaise (fem)
Tonks
Hannah
Su Li
Tracy Davis
Blaise (fem)
Tonks
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story so far looking forward to future updates. You know before you said something in the post i didn't even know you could review on this site lol.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol i'm not shure how thise voting thing works or if i'm allowed ta have more then one vote but i for shure put in a vote for Tonks (haha who wouldnt sumone cute an funny who can look however they want) an if i kan put in anuther one i'ma have ta go with da fem blaise. dark n sexy lol.