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interesting spin in the end update soon

fantastic chapter

Wasn't Richelieu also involved with plots to murder the King of France, or was that just the Three Musketeers?

Drow and vampires ploz.

Cant wait for more.

Fun and smutty story. I hope Harry doesn't let his power go to his head (either one of them) and continues to try and help the community with his abilities. Who will keep him company over the summer? More story please.

You made but one (as far as I could tell quickly) spelling mistake with your French, but I figure that is because of your keyboard. Ve

Hi! I just wanted to compliment you on your story. I'm usually very iffy about reading stories where Harry is too dominant. I don't enjoy seeing him treat women like crap. So I was not sure about reading your story at first. But I'm happy I did because you proved me wrong. Though he is the Alpha male so to speak, he still is concerned about the pleasure of this women and he seems to care about them. Good job. It turns me off when a character is only out for his own pleasure and barks orders at women. (There's too much of that in real life to find it amusing as a woman.) And Harry doesn't seem the type to do that because he does have a heart. I'm glad your Harry has a heart as well. So good job in keeping your Harry more like the Harry we all know and love.

liked the new chapter.

great update i hope you add more soon it felt likke forever to get this one put it was worth it