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Very nice! Who would I like to see involved? Aside from Susan Bones, I'd figure Harry would
be prowling for Parvati and Padma Patil. Isn't it every young man's fantasy to bed twins?

i ould love to see bellatriz and tonks especially i love those pairings!

Gabrielle +1
Parvati -1
Padma -1
Lavender +1
Susan -1
Cho +1
Su Li -1
Tracy Davis -1
Blaise (fem) -1
Pansy +1
Tonks +1
Narcissa +1

Those are my choices for the harem. Keep writing. Ths story is doing good but you could add a bit more discripitions of sex scenes.

Go with Gabrielle, Tracy, Blaise, and Tonks at least.

daphne ands tonks are both great chooses for harrys group the story going great andf i hope to read more soon

Love it! But... I'm going to vote -1 for Narcissa. She's not in the school and, methinks, a bit too old for him.

great story :)

about the girls...

i was thinking about adding tonks to harry's harem when he is at the dursleys satisfying his lust on muggle girls. tonks is guarding him and becomes more and more curious on why the girls harry has been with always come back for more and scream so loud (and maybe a little hero-worship?) so she decides to metamorph herself into an 'innocent' 'muggle' girl and lets herself be seduced by harry, thus bounding her to him.

that said...

what do you think about bellatrix and narcissa? i am very good at coming up with believable plots to add girls to his harem..... *wicked smirk*

thank you very much for the story and please update soon :)

xxxx Aria-Chan

Awesome story! Have Harry bond Tonks, Daphne Greengrass, Blaise Zabini (female), Susan Bones, and Cho Chang to him as well. Update Soon.

cool chapter. looking forward to the next one. (hopefully a lemon)

Beta... Shmeta,

I like this and can live with a few errors. I would like to see/read more of this though. Namely Cho's reaction to seeing her Harry with a Veela.