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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Quite technical ;)
Next Harem -Gabrielle
Next Harem -Gabrielle
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Parvati +1
Padma +1
Lavender +1
Su Li +1
Blaise (fem) +1
Padma +1
Lavender +1
Su Li +1
Blaise (fem) +1
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff. Good grasp of the English language (there are a few mistakes, just like everyone makes) but you need a beta. (I didn't see any beta-crediting, so I'm assuming you don't have one) We all do, and it shouldn't be too hard to get one. :p
Anywho, this is a change of pace from most veela stories. I like that, it's refreshing. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Anywho, this is a change of pace from most veela stories. I like that, it's refreshing. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gabrielle (age modified
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok just in case anyone reads:
ShadowandFlamePanther - Miswrote the intro. Meant Au from the 4th canon book, but I changed it to "AU from 4th book GoF" just so there's no confusion.
Aria-chan - ahm...damn the idea's too good. I can already see the plot bunnies dancing around me...away, away!!!
I can only think about them. Tonks and Black sisters were too cliche for me.
ShadowandFlamePanther - Miswrote the intro. Meant Au from the 4th canon book, but I changed it to "AU from 4th book GoF" just so there's no confusion.
Aria-chan - ahm...damn the idea's too good. I can already see the plot bunnies dancing around me...away, away!!!
I can only think about them. Tonks and Black sisters were too cliche for me.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. Hmm, keep it simple. Three girls. One for Hogwarts, one for Dursley's, and Fleur.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, as I think I've already confessed of my undying love for this fic... (>0^/ Cho -1, Blaise +1, Daphne +++++1!!! (I really like the way she's turning out in this fic!).
BTW, is this fic going to be an all M/F fic? If not, I'd like to see at least one of the Slytherin guys (someone especially nasty) get fooled around a little. But that's just a suggestion. So,
Please! Update! Soon! >u/
BTW, is this fic going to be an all M/F fic? If not, I'd like to see at least one of the Slytherin guys (someone especially nasty) get fooled around a little. But that's just a suggestion. So,
Please! Update! Soon! >u/
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like to have
Narcissa
tonk
susan bones
katie bell
blaise fem
Narcissa
tonk
susan bones
katie bell
blaise fem
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter moving along your story and the farther it goes the more i enjoy it! um i vote for Lavender and Narcissa and Tonks and it would be cool if you could get a vampire girl into the mix :)
looking forward to next update =:)
looking forward to next update =:)
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AU from 4th Book canon....... I have a few questions...
How can this story be AU and In Canon from the same time? I'm confussed.
For one Harry was not nor will ever be a Veela therefore he can not be in canon. It doesn't matter if you do put it in AU it doesn't change the fact that he is not a veela and therefore not in Canon.
As far as I know Canon means... You take the character directly from the book or movie ect ect.. and do not change a thing about them.
In this story Harry is Veela which is not canon.. You may think he is just because he is in a AU but he is not Canon would mean that Harry is the same as he is in the book or movie with no added magical abilities. Please do not state this story is canon because clearly it is not. This is not a flame just a question.
Please explain to me how you come up with that he is still in canon even though it is AU? Enquiring minds wish to know.
How can this story be AU and In Canon from the same time? I'm confussed.
For one Harry was not nor will ever be a Veela therefore he can not be in canon. It doesn't matter if you do put it in AU it doesn't change the fact that he is not a veela and therefore not in Canon.
As far as I know Canon means... You take the character directly from the book or movie ect ect.. and do not change a thing about them.
In this story Harry is Veela which is not canon.. You may think he is just because he is in a AU but he is not Canon would mean that Harry is the same as he is in the book or movie with no added magical abilities. Please do not state this story is canon because clearly it is not. This is not a flame just a question.
Please explain to me how you come up with that he is still in canon even though it is AU? Enquiring minds wish to know.