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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am terribly excited to read more, but please try to elongate your chapters! This is such a fun idea that you should just draw it out! Good job so far, more more more!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i want to know what happen?????? I think i am going to enjoy your story....
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, do us all a favor and post something more substantial. People are willing to wait for longer chapters.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story it's different from the other stories out there.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story line so far, keep it going you're doing great!!!!!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see where this is going!! Your original idea is most interesting! Update soon, please!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just a few of the errors
ch 1:
"Lilly please you can
ch 1:
"Lilly please you can
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start... I'm on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to find out where you are taking this. I can honestly say I have never read a fanfic that started this way. Please continue and soon!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luv the start
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story line. Please write more!