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by avari20

person Rosei
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! At Last!!! (I've been waiting for an update.) Your story is such a guilty pleasure!! Thanks!
person lorett
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AVARIL! I'm SOOOO in love with this story. You're incredibly gifted and I am SHOCKED that this is your first attempt at lemons. You did - um - well, bloody wonderfully. Now, I'm not one that really likes M/M, but something about the idea of Blaise and Draco just gets my engines revving. And, when they're both alpha-males...GRRRR. AND, when they BOTH want Hermione. I just get all - to coin Jonathon's phrase - 'tingly' inside. This was just amazing and I hope if you have an author update that you'll add me to the list. - Also, if you like geeky Yahoo groups, I'd love for you to come join mine. I have a primarily DM/HG shippers group, but we've really got all ships at port there. But, more importantly, I'm proud to say that I have some bloody fantastic authors in my humble little group and I love to name drop too...(GRIN). But, I'll refrain. Anyway, I'd love for you to pop by, if you're so inclined and join our little pow-wow. And, if you're interested in reading a fun little DM/OC story - I'd be honored if you popped in and read my fic - THE THREE KEYS, here at AFF. Here is the link to my yahoo group: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/hpthreekeysfanfictiongroup/ And, if you have time during the summer, and you want to take a read of my fics, I'd love it: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296766883 I've gotta say, I'm very much looking forward to reading the rest of your work! I'm quite impressed. Hope to see you around the group sometime, if you'd like. And, again, bravo on a captivating story and characters! Cheers, Lorett PS - my email - gardenerlorett@yahoo.com in case you have a personal story update list.
person Mystica
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter...update sooner please!
person Meredith
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're continuing! I love it.
person Darian
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! Where is the 6th chapter! Are you trying to kill me?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person SailorSun1
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you update your story soon. I have been waiting for the next chapter to come out since you lasted updated and I am very interested in knowing what is going to happen next.
person Lenler
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey you're online right now, when are you going to update this story, its really good!
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was an interesting start to a great story. I can't wait to see wat lies ahead for thr trio. I also love your other story. Nopw that was an intersting concept. I would never have thought about it. I do hope you can update soon.