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by avari20

person accio
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"and ruin the experience for Hermione before it even began"... LMHO. He's so sure of his performance!
person accio
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The least it couldo is look halfway decent." LOL. This one was soo Draco for me.

I wish I could have a choice like the one Blaise was thinking to offer Hermione. *We can all 3 live happily ever after* With Blaise and Draco? I'm totally IN!

I also wanted to say that I've noticed a lot of strange words (strange, for lack of a better way). It's nice, but it is funny. I'm not a native speaker, and so I rely a lot on "made" phrases that are continually used in this fanfic world. And in your story, I've found a lot of words that - although I can understand them - I'm not familiar with.

Just one thing: it is not always clear who is doing what.
person cris
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello i hope you update soon
this is really good
so hermione is in love with draco and blaise?
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, updated as soon as you can:)
person Amy
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Thats the worst possible place to stop!!! I can't wait for a review. I'm usually not into reading yaoi fanfiction, but I like this one... probably cause it's not 100% yaoi, but still. You're really good at this though! Keep up the good work!

Amy
person Petalsoft
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated! I've checked for it often. What a fantastic storyline you have going here. I can't wait to see how Malfoy reacts to her declaration and if she also loves Blaise as well. Good job!
person Lonely_demon
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must... Have... More.... Evil cliffy mate. Keep up the great work, I'm really liking this story!
person SailorSun1
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not the way I thought it was going but still the best D/H/B story I know of! I am so happy that you finally updated the story and I hope that the next chapter will be coming out soon. Until then!
person cherie
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved that chapter! I can't wait to see Draco's reaction. Please update soon! Holding breath and turning blue!! :)
person swiss miss
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is AMAZING! omg... wow!!! i cannot wait until you update! please let it be soon!

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