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by avari20

person cheeze
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is hotttt. hermoine is soooo lucky!
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very very very sexy and wonderful chapter. :) I love it!
person Malinda
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Blaise was pressed leaning back against the wall, his mouth open in a silent moan. One hand had reached up to tangle in the tapestry above his head, accentuating the muscles in his chest and abdomen."

Wow, that is a very pleasant mental image; and a big reason why I like this story so much. Everything seems natural and not forced or clumsy like so many others I have read. Nice job! And I love how Draco, even in love, is still a bit of an ass! Yea, Draco :)
person Chavela
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey honey! It's Isabel!

Thank goodness I come on when I did! When I saw this updated I about freaked out! Then I rushed to LJ to make sure, but you had not said anything yet, but I came over anyways and was BLOWN away.
I keep remembering your email you sent with the reasurances for this story, but still I was nervous! But then I read this and was like "YES!!!!!!!!!!!!" IT was fan-fucking-tastic! I freaking awesome! To say that I was thrlled with how awesome this went, would be a major understatement!

I am so excited about how this is going! And alothough I am sad to see this go, I am also excited because I get to see it wrapped up in what I seriously hope is the best ending!
I adore this!

And I can not wait for the next chapter, I hope it comes soon! Cause now I am dying to see what happens next.
Even though I never doubt how you write, I am keeping my fingers croosed that it won't take too much convinsing on Draco and Blaise's part to bring Hermione around!

Peace and Love!
~Isa
person DragonKisser
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Have ALWAYS been a fan of the Draco/Hermione/Blaise Threesome. I think more should be out there. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like the way this is going, I wasn't too sure at first but now I can't wait for the next installment. Yeah!
person frog
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please post the next chapter soon!!! And I would be sooooo cool if you also posted a alternative end for this story where Draco and Zambin did make her pregnat the night of the bonding(not that I don't like the direction the story is going now i just would like to know what would have happend if that night ended difrently).
person j
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love, love, love this story! I understand drowning in homework, but please don't forget this story. I must know what happens next!
person accio
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweetmotherofgod, girl! do you have any idea what you have done to me???? this is soooo twisted, right up my alley!!!! Can't wait to read more!

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