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by avari20

schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of Draco using the Fake Hermione as practise for Blaise. Excellent chapter!!!
person Daniel
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is much better and you know it!

Just one question "And then I
person moreta
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how intense..you've got to update soon
person Dreamweaver
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Think they'd noticed if I became the doll instead? LOL Keep those chapter coming. (Pun intended).
person Daniel
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Blaise had found himself in a perpetually constant state of arousal." He he he haha (Evil laugh)
"Blaise, confused, turned to look
person LaLa
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit! Now this is some hot stuff. Update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for chapter 3
person Chavela
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was way better. Way better! I liked the insight into Draco's mind. I gives you more of his feelings which makes him more inviting.
I know I said I was excited about you continuing because it was hot before. But seeing how determined Draco is as well as Blaise about possessing her, it can only get better from here.
PEACE
person Petalsoft
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I love this fiction. I especially enjoy how very passionate ( and horny) you've made Blaise. This is soooo hot! Please, I can't wait for more. I want to see how they finally get the 'real' Hermione.
person Legomygrego19
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Even better then the last time!!!! Keep going!!!!!!!! I can't wait!