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The scene between the ywo boys was very sweet.
I loooove that this is moving along more into thier plan. It's exciting. I hope the next chapter is also another progressive one leading to everything. This one had them closer to her so that is just FREAKING awesome! I can't wait for the next one. Hopefully it is soon as well.

its like everytime u write a chapter you amaze me it seems so real i love it update soon

Good chapter. Has a slightly passive feel to it. The ending is hanging a little from the rest of it, and is disconnected- it doesn't feel right with the rest of the chapter. Blaise is much more developed in this chapter. He's very much a lover above all else, not the silent, observer we see in canon, but you've made him your own. Draco is still very much a strategist, though I think Blaise is smart enough to unravel his plans himself. Though not bad at all, could be improved upon slightly. We get a clear sense of how accepting Hermione is and how easily she is to be tricked. I think we needed a little more banter to top it off between her and the boys, some teasing, make them sweat a little.
Am I sensing an already present relationship with Hermione, Ron and Harry? Draco and Blaise's hearts will be broken if there is one.
Good job.

Oh no, the dreaded cliffy. Please don't take too long to post. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

I'm really enjoying your story! The Slytherin princes *sigh* I'm anticipating the fun to come!

Draco, Blaise and Hermione threesome AND Draco/Blaise a powerplay?! I'm all aflutter! I was squeeing for a whole ten seconds out loud when I saw the description. There's not enough of it, and so, I am eternally grateful to you for writing this.
In addition to that, it's really well done. Believable and in character, descriptive, well developed and damned hot. Quality smut. Perfect and intense, but never overshadowing the plot.
WONDERFUL job.
Email me when you update?

that is HOT, please update.

Because somebody else touched her.

Daniel you might as well ask Avari if he/she could be her beta. Anyways, good job with the story so far the pacing is good and you should keep up with this story.

Actually, Pare, she is my beta. She, Maevenly, and IzzyBell. IzzyBell is the bet at grammatics, Daniel spots the inconsistentsies and evaluates the emotional plausibility, and Maevenly eggs me on. And a special thanks to Ada as well!