rate_review Reviews

very hot, please continue :P

Oh, Kelsey. I love stuff like this. The fact that you write it...I respect that...I couldn't. I do believe that you should write more.

I liked this story because I got real reactions out of this. It was very exciting and arousing because of how easy it was to visualize the actions they did. After chapter one I did not expect the entrance of someone so significant in the middle of the already ensuing scene with the maid and Zella. It was very well sequenced without the characters skipping beats that left you wondering how something was done.

The exact use of the wand confused me, the fact that the maid was "released" by the wand had me thinking she was being pleasured by it.

cliffy? but but PLEASE update please please please very good begingint to a story. i can`t wait till you update the writting is amazing.

continue love, it amazingg