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for You're Beautiful

by rush22

person rampage5191
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! You're this close *pinches fingers together* to making me cry. You're a great writer and you certainly know how to hook an audience. I know I'll be waiting on your heels for an update. 'You're Beautiful' is a fantastic song and I could listen to it forever. ^_^ It's the perfect match for the story line you're creating. Keep up your good work and creative (not to mention wonderful) thinking. But all hearts need to be healed soon or else i think I'll end up breaking open the floodgates.
person jen
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ugh i love it! but its so sad!!!
man
great job
update
person Bree
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's horrible! I'm bawling... Please make it better, PLEASE??? I can't continue to read this unless I know it's gonna get better!
person geo
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I was so close to crying that i had to wipe my eyes so I could finish it. It's so sad... finish please. I want to know if they ever see each other again.. please! mabey they will meet at the train station or somthing. Thanks. I love it!

geo
person whatever
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story its so good update soon
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was so sad and so beautiful. i cant wait for another update.
person TNgirl
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo sad!! You're breaking my heart! Great story, but still breaking my heart!!
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story.
person anna
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story, is it a one shot? I hope it continues...
person ashling
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww.... hurry and update! that was awesome! this is going to be a fantastic story and i want to see if hermione has a kid or not. i hope so:D:D:D:D:D:D, it will be more dramatic and people might think that she couldn't get anybody ;), anywho, great story and hoping for an update!