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for You're Beautiful

by rush22

person kit
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm confused@.@ if draco and pansy did the fidelity ritual thing how come she (pansy) has lovers and draco can't be with Hermione besides being married to ron that is? Also do u think u can write an epilogue with a happy ending for them both if not thats ok its a good fic anyways although a bit sad.
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!!!! You can't end the story like that!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!! Oh well, I loved it!
person Midnight Runner
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this song and its was so sad :( weldone you write beautifully :)
person Cas
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This Story was really fantastic and very emotional.You really make me cry.
person Avanell
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah! Is she happy with Ron? Or, can't they at least get together for a night and share ALL?!!
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, don't apologize for making people cry! I love a good sad fic once in a while. That was really a great story. Sooooo sad, just soooo good. Thanks for writing that!
person Cappuccino
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That story was sooo sad, yet so romantic. I actually cried. Great piece of work!
person Alli
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a perfect ending and I really don't feel bad for Draco.
person swivelchair
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you made me cry. This is really beautiful. Have you ever thought of making this into a short independent film? With little variations, of course. [we don't want JKR after our necks] Sorry, but I'm an independent filmmaker located somewher in SE Asia and I could see the potential in this story, particularly since the whole story revolved in the Train station and mostly in Draco's thoughts. I love Kieran's character in this, by the way. Email me of your thoughts. I'd love to make a film of this story of yours should we get proceeds for the project. Cheers!
person Nicola
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to say best chapter so far, cause they are all good. A beautiful story. I was in tears, not that I'm complaining. Please carry on

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