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by vetgirl

person GML
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shiver* Damn... *gasp* That was HOTT!!! OMGss! A delicious fantasy. I want to know about that detention now!!! *claps hands pleadingly* More Please!!!
person Alison
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Will there be another chapter? =o)
person LiLy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god that was soooooo hott! lol I think I may need a cold shower and I'm not even a guy, but anyway I just wanna say that I enjoyed your story very much and that you are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work =]
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 2!
person Kat Potter
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOoooooh I hope we get to Snape's "lesson" ;P
person cyn
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG...how incredible...gah! OMG. Please tell me you are going to put up Snape's lesson...cause OMG>..I can't even think coherently right now
person Lacy
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gapes* *stutters incoherently* ah da da lah bla eg uh al umm... *shakes head* *wipes drool*

WoW...that. was. hot. OH SO hot. hot, steamy shower scenes are always GREAT! and voyeur!Snape is TOOO perfect. I think I need a shower...and a new set of clothing...

Beautifully written, very vivid and appealling descriptions. Awesome coherency and very IC Snape. Great great job!

*gets down on knees to grovel* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel!?! *looks all cute and pouty*
person Meyra
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! It was really HOT :)
person Amessis
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very hot.