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by Darknessmaster

person Liz
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tooooooo short!!!!!

although you have peeked my interest now...

I'll check back in and hopefully find an update soon..*looks up at author with puppy dog eyes*

please update soon

Liz
person BadAss1
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT please please UPDATE A S P
person BloodPhoenix
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Can't wait to see how you develop this.
person Night Shade
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have my attention, please update soon! ^.~
person foxygirl
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I like it so far. Really interesting.^^
person pimpshit
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay i just had to say that first of all i'm loving how this is sounding and second everything of yours that I've seen so far...I am LOVING! your a great author and I cant wait to see what your going to do with this new story!!
person Annie
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start. I liked your set up and thank you for not having Harry and Ginny together then having him 'go gay' or anything like that. I like the way you had Neville save Harry and how you kept Neville semi-Neville, having to ask if anyone had seen his toad, to get Harry out of the room. I hope you update soon, Please and Thank You.

Hope your muse(s) is/are good to you.

Happy Writings.
person X Marvolo
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... will you explain why he turned? Ahd I think it would be good if you added more action and diologes
person Ari
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, promising.
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was interersting, although I withhold judgement until I've seen more, this could be either very good or very bad... oh, who am I kidding, I love Dark!Harry, update!

Skull Bearer.

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