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for Love Can Be a Battle or a War

by Ms_Figg

person Sea
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum! I'm breathless, if Hermoine needs a rest, I'm available LOL!
person justnothingeess
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo soo soo goo!! please update soon!
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! WHAT A PERFECT WAY TO END THE STORY! IT ALL STARTED WITH A FIGHT AND IT ENDS WITH ONE! AWSOME! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT STORY!

YOUR BIGGEST FAN,
TIFFANY
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Agatha: Actually, Hermione isn't doing a very good job of handling Severus here, in my opinion. She's trying, but she's pretty childish about it. I don't see her as smart-assed, I see her more as having a hatred of being bullied. And Severus is a bully. I haven't ever given Severus the upper hand? Hm. The way he works her over in bed when he gets to her, I'd say the hand is definitely leaning his way. But then again, not everyone sees things the same. Thanks for your review.
person Denise
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chp 9-11: Wow, i absolutley LOVE this story. it is sooo funny!! i loved the part with Severus locked in with Sybil (that part even scarred me!! I felt really sorry for snape.).....and Tonks and Kingsley are definatley funny too!! Can' t wait to see what happens next! Please Update Soon!!
person droxy
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hermione has a point, Severus is very picky.
person Denise
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
About the beta thing: Glad you cleared that up. Personally I think that you are a great writer, and really dont have much of a use for a beta.....I just got a bit curious after reading a few of the reviews...
person Alyssa
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

I don't want either of them to beat each other! I want them to get to the action before a victor could be declared.
person Corazon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The scene with Sybil and Severus was priceless!!!

ROTFLMAO!!!!

I loved it!!!!

Hugs,
Corazon
person Cin
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't! Stop! Don't! Stop! Don't Stop!!!!!!!