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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Alyssa,
I was not in any way trying to insult Ms_Figg. I believe that NOBODY is above a beta. Even the tiniest of tiny mistakes can ruin a story, and break the 'suspension of disbelief'.
And to Ms_Figg, I hope you were not offended by my remarks. I am an avid reader of your work, but believe that you could write better with a little helper monkey checking for grammar and flow.
SB.
I was not in any way trying to insult Ms_Figg. I believe that NOBODY is above a beta. Even the tiniest of tiny mistakes can ruin a story, and break the 'suspension of disbelief'.
And to Ms_Figg, I hope you were not offended by my remarks. I am an avid reader of your work, but believe that you could write better with a little helper monkey checking for grammar and flow.
SB.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is coming along so far! On one hand I love that it hasn't gotten right to the lemons and been over too soon, on the other, I'm on the verge of needing the lemons lmao. I can't wait for their fight in the ROR next chapter, should be great!
~Ailo
~Ailo
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa doggy indeed.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh I could SCREAM!!! How could you end it there?!?! You evil, evil meanie!!! You've had us dying to see this and now you clif it?! NOW?!?! When I saw the updates I started bouncing on my seat just to contain my excitement... *Pouting* I have no choice but to wait =( meanie =op LOL
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are soo evil for leaving it there!!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - go, Severus! Now don't let the witch beat you, 'cuz that would make her disappointed in you, and also your "little wizard" might not come out and play then. Fight, Severus, fight!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you so totally have to update....i knew that they'd only screw after they fought....plz make it HOT HOT HOT!!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! No matter how many HG/SS stories you come up with, they are all wonderful! I can hardly sit and watch the movies or read the books anymore without getting a delightful little squirmy sensation whenever the Great One appears. Definitely not comfortable when the kids are sitting right next to me! Thank you ma'am, may I have another?
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ms. Figg where the hell do you get all these ideas?!?! They are simply amazing. Write more!!! I'm addicted!