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for Love Can Be a Battle or a War

by Ms_Figg

person poppy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting!
person Edania
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
girl power! Oh now thats it.now snape is the bitch! ha! I love that chapter lol. he got his ass kicked..well sort of. Man i love snape like this, he so evil! woot!
person Hypatia
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 14 definitely showcases your descriptive writing skills. Now Hermione has Severus pinned...heh heh heh. Was wondering if they have their wands with them.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! GO HERMIONE! UPDATE SOON! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

YOUR BIGGEST FAN,
TIFFANY
person firewall
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha at least she got a few good kicks in, albeit not to the groin, wouldn't want damaged goods there. She is able to think ahead anyway. Sooo, looks like we're getting down to the nitty gritty, eh? Let's see how long it takes Severus to recover. Hmmm, sounds like he finds hot and sweaty a turn-on.
person Inspire
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Ladytalon
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way he got her out of "I give up" mode...I'm sure that now they're fighting, they'll need some lemonade to cool off.........!
person Angie30
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Smokes!!!!!!!!!!!!
person droxy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent and plausible fight scene. It's true smaller opponents need to get into closer range. Bulk and strength are not necessary to win a fight. Knowledge of the body and the ability to do "escort" techniques can bring many an opponent to their knees, often painfully.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMNDAMNDAMN......
Please UPDATE again.....SOONNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!