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for Detention

by merimom

schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo....slick
person Maria
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a conniving, sinister bastard! Yummm!!!
person loven_you
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I liked it!
Great idea about making the readers feel like the person in the story!
I didn't quite understand the ending, but it was cool!
person Angie30
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked hot detention! Although I wouldn't need that little potion to want and obey him. *winks* Well done!