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OH MY GOD! That cliff just lured me out to review, damn you! *shakes fist* So you know, the usual, it's like REEEEALLY go00d!!!
But sorry, just one mistake I wanted to say was the 'Itadakimasu', not 'Itadikimasu.'
Also, there are just some mistakes that could easily be corrected with a readover. Things like "they" instead of "there" and "to" when you meant "so" or maybe it was the other way around.. Derno, they're really small infractions, nothing that will keep the reader from understanding what you meant to say.
But then... maybe there's only these mistakes because you guys just write it out and wanna quickly upload to us readers and YEAH that's awesome, so screw mistakes!! English language who? What?
You guys are kewl. Thanks for the effort and keep updating!

i cant believe you left it like that. oh the madness. you are the reason why i have to keep checking. however another great chapter. :)

Alright, so I had this whole review thing.. and somehow it became truncated, maybe because I pressed return. So here I go again! (new paragraph) OH MY GOD! That cliff just lured me out to review, damn you! *shakes fist* So you know, the usual, it's like REEEEALLY go00d!!! see, like a fangirl, except with more scrolling of exclamation marks. Your description of the scenery and ryokan sound dead on, and I say "sound" because I've been taking Japanese for 4 years but like I know crap? Fafafa!

Sorry, but I wanted to correct on one thing: "Itadakimasu" instead of "Itadikimasu."
Also, there are a few small mistakes here and there, nothing a readover won't pick up. Things like "they" instead of "there" and "to" instead of "so," or it might be the other way around for the latter. I don't know, small stuff like that, it's nothing that keeps the reader from understanding what you meant to write though. But you know... maybe there are only these small infractions because you wrote it up fast and uploaded to even quicker because you wanted us readers to get the goodies REAL fast so YEAH, awesome, screw editing!!! English language who?? What? I don't care! as long as I get another chapter of OSP!

This story is pretty frickin kewl. And I mean kewl as in kewl, not cool. Thanks for the effort, and keep updating!

"because I know I am not the best, but I'm pretty good...I guess. My only worry is to unintentionally make Draco OOC, since it is my first time writing him..."

Ten lashes for thinking you're only pretty good.....YOU ARE GREAT great great great! Naughty thing, I'm going to look more closley after you post the beta'd stuff, didn't realise you were doing notes at the end too! And you shouldn't worry! You rock and your plot rocks and your in characterness rocks!......and your hyperness translates through email............ok I think I need to go to bed MWHAHAHAHAHAHA

I'm really enjoying this story. It's so well written, and I've been so happy to see updates every day. I'm so anxious to read more!

another awesome chapter. i cant wait for the next. :) i love when i have to check at least 3 times a day to see if you might have updated.

I love your story so far. I can't wait to see where you plan to take this. Later.
~Diana

Unbelievably good. I can't believe how hooked I am on this story. It's like watching your favorite tv show, where every episode ends on a cliffhanger and you impatiently await the next week to find out what happens, only to be hanging again, bitting your nails.

Um....that was kinda evil. That was the the best cliffhanger yet, still it was evil of you though. This story just gets better and better. Just makes me love Draco Malfoy even more (I've always had a soft spot for the Bad Boys and the Villians. They always end up to be my favorites.) As for the whole tv cliffhangers, I had to stop watching Twin Peaks as a kid because of the cliffhangers (Damn you David Lynch!) Had to do the same thing with Lost. The only show that I can tollerate with it's intense cliffhangers is Battlestar Galactica (don't ask why because I don't know.) Anyway, back on topic, you are a brilliant writer. This story is insanely good. I'm hoping for another chapter to pop up today before we oficially ring in the New Year. I need something to drink a beer to!

Bad beta I am :( I guess I'll go back and re read over the last couple of chapters as I kinda devoured them a lil too greedily heheh what can I say, I was as excited as ya'll are to get new chapters and maybe read them too fast/eagerly