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Once again you're bloody brilliant and i <3 you for it.

Yes, it's this is the same pen name i use on ff.net. I did change the name of that story to "What Could Have Been," and have been neglecting it far too much. I'm stil suffering from a bit of a block, but your story is one of the few that does help to inspire me.

Gracias for that.

Anyways, will be checking back for updates from you.

update please. :) see because now we know draco has to be in the next chapter. well i really dont know but im finally hoping that he will be in the chapter. :)

Great story , I just wish you'd stop with the evil cliffies ! ;) ... It does make the story tht much more exciting though and I totally look forward to the next chapter.<3 You truly re a wonderful writer and the more chapters you write the better you get , the more you improve. You and your beta are doing a great job and I hope you write more asap ! Happy new year and ... have a great day ! lol

This is one of the most researched, thought-out fictions I've read. You keep the plot moving while still maintaining a large amount of mystery concerning the story. I love the maturity of Hermione and how you left physical scars on the characters, proving not everything can be healed by magic. Please continue soon!

that IS an evil cliffie...please update soon. I enjoy the tone and the build up in this story.

What an exciting chapter! Severus's son sounds hot! I wish we had a picture ^.^ I can't wait till the next chapter! Keep up the good work.

i love you story so far! it has been such a wonderful idea and you have quite a gift for intricate and compelling story telling. i cant wait to read more of your story as it is posted. keep up the good work!

Wonderful story, beautifully paced. Though I must say I'm also glad 'Ryu' has finally made an appearance. XD I love the small incorporation from Fushigi Yuugi in Chap. 6 too. And I think I am falling in love with Yuki. xD One of the points of this story I particularly appreciate is that neither of the protagonists are perfect, beautiful people. It gives a much more realistic note to the story - I applaud you. Interesting end to Chap. 7; I look forward to reading the next. ^__^

*Applause* Bravo!!!

Such a wonderful fanfiction. SO dramatic and Mysterious. Chapter after chapter I was on the edge of my seat. Excellent piece of writting, there isn't anything to complain about.

Must say this is one of the "Best" post HBP.

Please update regulary.

How many chapters were you thinking/planning of writting do you know?

*still applauding*

Well that was a very interesting installment... and I had assumed that Draco would do something of this nature. I am surprised at the inclusion of Yuki, but I must say I adore his character thus far. Of course trusting him on account of Hermione's relationship with Severus isn't exactly advisable, but we'll see how Hermione handles it. As for Draco himself, well; what can you really say. Of course he has to be a bit off kilter. Look what the kid (and I do say kid) went through. Hope you have a good New Years! See you next year ;) Oh and if I didn't mention it, it keeps getting better!