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for Out of the Silent Planet

by moirasfate

person Hanna Delacour
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonder if Draco knows more about healing Hermione than she thinks, maybe in more ways that one lol! I really liked this chapter. I think it was a real peak into the fire and ice that is Draco. I agree with Hermione, Draco should not have destroyed Severus's journals. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Every time I get to the end of one of these I feel like a spoiled brat because I just want more!
person McCHicklet
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is my favorite chapter but then again there was smut. Thanks for acknowledging my review. Keep updating. Will wait till then.
person Know-it-all
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The sex was awesome! lol. But seriously, good job. I'm so jealous of her! I can't wait until Draco gets a new arm. Things should really heat up then. haha.
person southern cross
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo!! that was lovely, hot smut. there was a quality of reality to the sex that i liked. especially that they fell asleep before indulging again. i hate when the guys go on and on and as nice as that sounds, it is pure "fiction"

and now they are off!! traveling through Europe with Draco sounds fun indeed. and their "relationship" is progressing nicely. just to be clear, they are in their late 20's? i am sure it is somewhere in the fic but i don't recall it.

love love love that his hair is long and i hope you leave it!

~Sara~
person Katz Potter
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again I review your fantastic story, because it is fantastic. I adore the very well written smut, the Draconess of Draco, and the comeplete awesomeness of Hermione being Hermione. The way you make Draco act is beautifully canon, something I believe every fic author should strive for. Bravo, Bravo!
person McChicklet
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I like the plot. I hope you update soon.
person Janus
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I swore I could hear Al Green playing in the background after that steamy little scene. There better be more comin'. Such a lovely chapter. Now I understand why romance novels are so popular. I have been waiting for this chapter all week. Now that you have mentioned a side trip to Italy, I am wondering if Draco plans on contacting an old friend from school, y'know, like Blaise Zabini. Damn, now I have to wait like a whole freakin' week for the next chapter. *Sighs* Oh well, I guess back to the Physics homework.
person dramioney
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*ohhh*

Love that quote, great way to end a chapter.

And what a chapter (11) was, H.O.T! Finally some really hanky pankiness ;D.
Draco really charmed her into making her trust him a little before he pound her like a prey. Must say She had it coming, i think she wanted something of the likes to happen but with her own consent and recieving proper pleasure.
You've written the act well, and still remembered through the whole sexuell act that he only had one hand,(At times i felt sorry for him not having to use both hands) he still could carry out as he pleased.

He seems also eager to return to England, I say something fishy is going on (as you hinted before). As he already got pass by the no "harming" contract in the oath, its more likely that he'd do it again right!?

Keep up with the greatness! Still awesome to read.
person sugamama
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am totally knackered now(falling alseep at the keyboard). it is now 5.45am an i have just finished the whole story so far. please email me when you update. this fic is fantastic. well done