rate_review Reviews

Hmm, it is just me or does Draco not seem as dangerous anymore. I thought Draco would be more dark and hating then he is, maybe it is all but fake and we will soon see his insanity later. I wonder, poor poor Hermione. The story is going along well! Cant wait to see what happens next...some more Draco Hermione fighting? I do love it when the two of them use their brains to outwit each others, quite attractive.

LOVED the start. and the rest of it haha. and am i the only one who has a feeling malfoy's going to somehow fix her leg? i don't know i just got some sort of a vibe from him haha. o and i had something else i was going to tell you but i can't for the life of me remember what it was. OOO haha scratch that. ok so i was so shocked when i checked this to see if it had been updated and 2 CHAPTERS! i flipped. and so i have to go read the next one now.

eeks. ok soo snape's (i'm sorry severus just sounds soo weird to me) son is disturbed. he seemed kind of sweet during the fight he had with draco but i can see how he became creepy. ok so i'm basically just wondering what's going to happen when they get to italy. not only because i just want to know what happens but because i love italy. haha. i've always wanted to go there but never had the oppertunity. maybe this will make me feel like i have. haha riiiight. reading about italy in a fic is gonna make me feel like i'm there haha. but then again reading scarlett did make me feel like i was in ireland. that was actually when i became as obsessed as i am with ireland. and that would be very obsessed. haven't gone there either.. *sigh*

ok though i think i've rambled enough for one review. haha can't wait for the next chapter

I'm so excited that you updated! Although a short chapter, it has many promises of fun things to come (fun? lol) The way that Yuki's character has gone from charming, shy to very stalkerish is creepy! However, it adds a more to the story and keeps it interesting. I can't wait for Draco to get his new arm!

Oh, honey, this just gets better and better! You are so beautifully, wonderfully consistent, and I admire your ability to keep your story focused! Keep it up, I look so forward to logging on and seeing if there's a new chapter! You make Auntie's day!

Wow, Yuki's a bastard. I'm first in line to hit him upside the head! Now, I understand that Yuki's fears for Hermione are well-intended, but to let them go so far during the night... thank god Hermione escaped! I love how you compared Yuki's madness to Draco's madness. That was awesome. I think Yuki has some possession issues...

I noticed some spelling and grammar errors, but for being unbeta'd, it was really good.

Draco's an ass, but I love his assy-ness. He's just so... Draco, I guess.

I enjoyed how you ended this chapter, the kind of foretelling of what Hermione will do in the future concerning the inn.

All in all, very much up to par with your previous chapters; I applaud you and give you a plate of cookies.

Very nice, I really like this story. Just fell on it tonight. And I really liked it. I can't wait till the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work. I love this.

Hmm...that was a very tame chapter. Don't get me wrong, it was great but, I'm used to all that insane intensity that has been in the previous chapters. Well maybe it wasn't totally tame with that whole Yuki/Draco 'whose got more testosterone seeping out of thier pores' scene. So Yuki is a bit unstable as well, eh? Should be interesting to see how this developes. Seems almost like Fatal Attraction, y'know, Like how Glenn Close just followed Michael Douglas and his family around, got pissed, and boiled his daughters bunny. Ok, I'm rambling, anyways, I'm excited to see how events are going to unfold in Italy and which characters are going to come into play. You also have my interest piqued with the last two paragraphs of this chapter about Hermione feeling regret and being unsure about the turn of events until she returns to the resort many years later. Makes me truly wonder what is about to happen to our fine, young heroine. Lords of Acid? That is a group name I haven't heard in a while. I went back later and reread the chapter. Instead of Al Green I was thinking more along the lines of Massive Attack or Juno Reactor. Scene is way to intense for some Al Green :)

ooh that yuki is a bad bad man. i cannot believe the tension there. firstly with draco/yuki and then hermione/yuki.

i must say i loved that she collided with him and he pulled her to her feet by her clothes! that was cute and then she clung to him...very interesting dynamics growing between them.

the ending was interesting. they left which was present in the timeline, but then the voice changed and became more of a flashback...can't wait to see what happens and to find out why she goes back! good to know i wasn't tripping when i felt the similarities between the lady of the house and dumbledore.

good to hear more is coming.

~Sara~

SOooooooooooooooooooooooo good! Can't wait to read more!