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This story is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love the way you have captured Draco's Character!! well done!!! Please Update soon!!

I did enjoy this very much. I liked this chapter, very Draco. Hermione's reaction to everything in the shop was very cute. I like your style if writing. I can't help but be curious as to what will happen in the future in regards to Yuki, yes very curious indeed. Also I really hope that in the future we will se a jealous Draco. Nothing sexier than a jealous Draco. I love it. Well, I can't wait to see the next chapter. Hopefully it will come soon.
Isa

no need to worry i did not find this chap boring at all! i did however find myself wishing i were in italy. the last bit felt very much like that scene from pretty woman and i thought it was cute. poor hermione all this cold air must be killing her leg! and then i think back to when he asked about her leg...maybe he knows something she doesn't.

cannot wait for more.

~Sara~

wow he's very controlling of her, I have suspisions about those oaths she took. What Draco's real motive?

Another great chapter, of course. Your descritpton of these places are so vivid. Have you ever been to Italy or Norhtern Italy for that matter? Because your descripition of this place, makes me think you actually have lived there. Transition chapters are always a little slow, but a necessity. I thought it was still a good chapter and intresting seeing Hermione get a little jelious. Good Job!!

Thanks for replying to my review not everyone does it. I still love the story even if there isn't any smut.

Transitions are a necessary evil in any good story but honestly because you set Draco up to be unpredictable I found myself after every sentence waiting for him to do something extraordinaryly DRACO! This chapter was as pleasent to read as the one before and the one before etc.....Poor Hermione at the edge of her seat! I can imagine those little wheels in her head spinning fast and furious! Torn between wanting to smack the wanker senseless or throwing herself at his feet screaming " WHIP me! BEAT me! Make me write bad checks!" Wait a minute that's what I would do if I had Draco!*Evil Laugh*Cest la vie....what can I say I am TWISTED.....Update soon! We're WAITING....oh for your Beta get better!!!! :)

You DO update fast! All the better, I say. I liked the traveling sequence. I spent a year in Japan and I really miss riding on the trains. There is nothing like it here is the US. *sigh* That dress sounds hot! Green, a coincidence? I think not. Keep up the good work.

This story ROCKS. I love the fact that you show Draco's frailty as well as Hermione's. Niether one of these chracters were ever perfect and to see what the years have done to both of them make them all the more human. BRAVO! Update soon as I am looking so forward to the journey.

Excellent story love the different pysches and possessiveness