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for Out of the Silent Planet

by moirasfate

person Katie
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that sounds lovely. I'd love to be able to go over there. God actually I just want to go to Europe. I haven't traveled much yet. When I was younger I went to Canada and Mexico and around the US but I would love to go somewhere exotic. And you're making Italy seem so serene and peaceful. You're so lucky to have been there. Well I could actually moan and groan to you for hours about the fact that I've never been there (it was one of my greatest ambitions when I was younger to travel) but I won't bore you with that. Great chapter... not much action which is disapointing. haha. Update soon.
person Aunt Bijou
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Moirasfate, honey, you make Auntie a very happy woman. Oh, what a complex tapestry you are weaving, and how I'm enjoying following all the threads. I'm wee bit suspicious though... is Hermione pregnant? Oh, don't tell me, if she is, don't spoil it, I'll find out with everyone else. I'll have you know, though, I'm bouncing with anticipation in my chair, (which luckily has been oiled and no longer squeaks!). Love the sense of disorientation you threw into the train journeys. And the achy knee. If you ever need any advice about achy, creaky knees, I'm your woman. Since I have one. My son likes to ask why I keep Rice Crispies in my knee (shudder). I tell him it's purely for entertainment purposes, party tricks, and so on. I digress. I'm waiting eagerly for the next installment, and I just know it will be good. (claps hands and wriggles excitedly.)
person ccrawley
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was hard to stop jumping up and down to read the next chapter. Was just so excited. Liked the chapter. Looking forward to seeing who the old friend is.
person Katz Potter
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, lovely lovely chapter! I love how Draco is all controlling and stuff. Hermione could stand up for herself a bit more, though. Nonetheless, wonderful chapter. I liked how Draco woke her up by pulling her hair. :p Poor Hermione being so cold...

I confess I was sad when I scrolled past the last line of dots to find that the chapter was over. I wanted more!

Still, another excellent chapter well done! Only one real grammatical error that I noticed as I read it a second time, but it wasn't too bad. If you ever need a beta reader, feel free to e-mail me at katzloffsdraco@yahoo.com.

By the by, the cookies are magical and turn into any kind you want them to be... Here's another plate. :p
person Rin-chan
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you updated this soon!! I was so happy about it:)))
They aren't boring as you said..i liked them very much so.....wouldn't be bad a little bit of action in the next ones though :)))
Best wishes to you and of course to your beta!!!!!!
person rox4787
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it cant wait to read more
person apple_blossum
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm always checking for updates of this story since I adore it so much and then when I see an update I *SQUEEE* madly and am sure everyone around me thinks I'm deranged. I really like this chapter and didn't think it was boring at all. It's good to see Draco getting back into his old self. I hope to read much more of their adventures in Italy. Who is his "friend"..is it Blaise? Will he really be getting another arm? Cuz poor Hermione, I'm sure she'd have a lot more fun in the sack with Draco having two arms and not just one...you know better leverage and all.... hehehe
person Principessa
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i blink and get two new chapters!!! I should blink more often. Us usual your story ensnared me and i was glued to my screen untill the chapters were read. I love it! keep it up!

*Blinks rapidy to see if her theory on new chapters works*
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very very great chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)
person vilasgirl
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say I love your story. It is very well written. Please continue. The actions of the characters are quite true to form. PS. I may not always review each chapter but I am here :)