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for Out of the Silent Planet

by moirasfate

person Diana
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::Sigh:: I love this story so much. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but my computer has been acting up. This story just keeps on getting better and better. Keep up the great work. Later.
~Diana
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so i had a really bad day in school today. college as usual is kicking my butt. i go home and i decide that i should read some stories to distract me and what do i see... my favorite story updated. YAYAYAYAYAYAY and on a weekday. wow. thank you. see i knew you cared. :) as always great i love his arm and i cant wait to read another chapter before my 8am class on monday. :) your favorite anon
person ccrawley
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione not being able to tell if Draco's madness is just an act. Loved the buildup with his staring at her lips and the whole drama of the arm. Just wondering if the arm will hurt Hermione and if Draco had planned to use her magic for the arm. Love the story so far and enjoy each new chapter.
person Rin-chan
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God....the arm will manipulate him??? Sweet Havens..he has been already mad (in a point of view)
but now what'll happen to him..?? (can't wait the next chapter..i know you updated just now, but it's just the way it is...readers always want more and more....
they're incorrigible..well, most of them ...like me for the matter:)))
By the way i loved italian in it!!! I've been learning it since elementary..and now in a bilingual school,, it was great....hope you'll continue soon!!!!!!!

Best wishes

( I hope also that your beta isn't sick anymore......)
person Redlightspin
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
horny devil he is
person rox4787
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it cant wait to read more
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Had to jump over here and say YAY!
person Lilly
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi this is Lilly from Rome.... who's madly in love with your fic and very glad that you have updated so soon. The characterization of Draco is awesome( I ehm have a thing for mental issues) and above all finally an evil Draco with sense and not a tormented brat prince redimed by the damsel of choice..
Go on!!

Lilly



anyway a little note: Fabrizio is written like this, with a z not 2 c.. but I guess that pronouncing it in english it kinda sounds the same.













person hermionebrowneyes
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i just started reading your story and its quite good i think you got the charicters realy well i hate it when people make draco sickinle sweet its not him i like you idea its very orginal ill keep looking for updates
person kazfeist
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cracking good story. Minor glitches...\"bare\" instead of \"bear\", \"affective\" instead of \"effective\", \"ascent\" instead of \"assent\", things like that. Spell check doesn\'t always work, if both words are correctly spelled. Keep up the good work. I assume all three will meet up sometime for fun and games...? Cheers!