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for Out of the Silent Planet

by moirasfate

person Darian
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! This chapter was good ....I like the small shift of power there between Draco and Hermione. I can't wait to see what happens next....I have your steak, fries and ranch dressing awaiting you.....Now all I have to do is get Alan Rickman....That may be a tad hard but for your updates I'll try my best. He is rather sexy isn't he? Don't laugh....But I actually watched that HORRID version of Robin Hood just to see my darling Alan is those cute trousers! For Shame! It was worth it! Thank you gain for the excellent update!
person Aunt Bijou
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! You wrote another chappie before Auntie could review... not that I mind! Wonderful, and delicious, and oh, how different the sex is when you've got a bum knee! Do you know, the Husbandly One actually got...er... distracted the other night, because I straightened my leg (it hurts if you don't, you know) and it went crrrrruuuunnnch! After 15 years, you'd think he'd just sigh and keep going, but no, he stopped and growled, "Were you planning on telling me that it was hurting?" No,dammit, it doesn't hurt, now get on with it! (rolls her eyes and laughs). Interesting, that tingle of magic over her leg just before she wrapped it around him. Or HE wrapped it around him. Was that Vulcan giving them a ... (snort)... helping hand?? Okay, no more truly horrifying puns. Can't wait for the next chapter... but I will! Hugs, lovie!
person Jade Symphony
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am an avid reader and an avid lurker...I would love any e-mails concerning your story. :o) (kimngoc@yahoo.com)
person Katie
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw way to leave me hanging! haha. that thing about his finger tasting like metal kind of disgusted me though. but whatever. draco's still as hot as hell. you better update soon though. cause i'm dying for then next chapter.
person Rachel
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. The plot line is very original and has had me ensnared from the first chapter. I am anxious to see what happens next. Update soon!
person michelle
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLLY MOLLY! *GAPES* your story is so dark. I love it. Is draco going to be like this foever. I hope he at least respects hermione. One thing that always drives me crazy about draco is his possessiveness. I love your story very much. I love the way draco controls everything. lol. update soon.
person Know-it-all
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful chapter! I mean interesting... I don't know if wonderful is really the word for it, from Hermione's POV. But I'm glad Draco got his arm back, even if it is creepy. I can't wait to read the next chapter. It looks like it's shaping up to be very interesting!
person Darian
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! The arm is an interesting turn of events....The story is getting better and better every chapter. I'll think everyone is going to need an update ASAP. We may have to take a vote and lock you in a room to produce for the fans of this story until complete! Seriously great chapter...Bad Draco....
person Katz Potter
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, lovely chapter! That arm is rather... iffy, isn't it? I don't like it. Nopenope.

And OMGWTFBBQ is he about to rape her? I know you said something about juices and all but still! She obviously doesn't want it in her mind...

I vote for the removal of the arm at once!

Very exciting chappie with the arm and all. As usual, riveting wording and and impeccable storyline. ...Perhaps that should be reversed. Impeccable wording and riveting storyline. Whatever, it's lovely!

That's a wonderful choice of cookies! I prefer peanut butter with a Hershey's Hug in the middle myself, but yours are yummy too! Here, have another plate!
person Ravenfire
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! I'm so in love with this fic I'm left almost speechless over it...almost. I love it so much that I've nominated you at Dangerous Liasons Awards because your writing is simply that good. I adore your Draco. He's just so full of rage and seemingly demented, it's an experience just to read about it. Hermione is brilliant in your hands. I can see how she could have grown apart from Ron and Harry, which makes me sad, but it's very realistic. I'm still in awe over the way you brought us to Japan. Like, I could truly see Hermione sitting in a Ryokan eating miso soup. I'm really impressed with the way you paint a scene and take us all on a ride to that place, and or country. I'm so glad I caught up with you and I'm bouncing up and down to see what else you have in store for us! I wonder who Draco is going to meet?! *Iz excited* Thank you so much for writing this story and sharing it with us. If it's okay, I think I'll head over to your lj to say 'hi' sometime. Again, Thank you!!