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for Out of the Silent Planet

by moirasfate

person Know-it-all
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know I say that I love ALL your new chapters.. and I do, but this one is particularly special! It was nice for a change to have the sex be something a little more romantic. It seems like the two of them are becoming closer than ever. *squeel* I loved the way Draco poured his little heart out! So angsty. Can't wait to see what comes next. Keep up the good work.
person nightslight
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are on a roll here...last three chapters are great! I love the lemon, written with such raw feeling, very very well done. I love the small fight they had, good to see that Hermione still has it in her to beat up Draco. I wonder what is to happen next! I cant wait!!!
person bubbles
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read this the whole way through and boy, is this good. I love the story, the depth of character and the slightly sadistic Draco. Oops . . . I love how intense this entire story is and it's even better that you update very quickly. ;)
person Katz Potter
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love you even more than I did! Eddie Izzard! "The Mormons ARE from Mars, Dad, we've had it checked out."

Yay, Draco didn't rape her! Okay, the arm isn't THAT bad if it stopped him from raping her. Awwww, poor Draco... he's so conflicted inside!

Lovely lovely smut, lots of smut. Yummyness. I like the whole interaction between them! Yesh. Blaise Zabini... ah, Blaise. I'm noticing some clich
person Janus
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! I wait till the weekend to wait for the next chapter and I find THREE wonderfull, lovely chapters! It was a wonderful break from studying Calculus II and Physics. These chapters were wonderful, especially this last one. I'm diggin' on the whole possessed arm thing. Reminds me of the comic book Witchblade, except the arm can't do all of the cool things the Witchblade can. Crap! I'm rambling again, sorry. It will be interesting to see what direction you take Draco in with his new arm. Can't wait to see Blaise Zabini. I'm getting all excited. Ok, I'm going to go back to watching the Super Bowl!
person ccrawley
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter in a great story.
person Redlightspin
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(chokes on popcorn then gets up to shout) Encore! Encore!
person baybevoyce
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So... hot... ...Was that uh... 4 positions????????

...Gah.

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Okay okay, the grace period has passed. But I think, even if Hermione doesn't, that Draco's pre-coital concession was important.. Hm... I'm going to think about that for a while. I'm surprised that Hermione thinks that the sex was different because of how he treated her in bed, instead of directing attributing it to what he had said earlier. Because perhaps saying something out loud reinforces it just so much more. And earlier in the chapter with Yuki, he seemed so conflicted, alternating between calling her a bitch and a lovely lady (I don't know if I'm remembering this correctly). Meh... Derno. Them two are so fudgy. Whatever fudgy means.
person rox4787
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it cant wait to read more
person Chavela
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well you know my first declarations will be to your genius. Thank you so much for making that so passionate and erotically beautiful.
To me, that so far has been the best chapter. His statements to her actually had me tear up a bit. So strong and filled with such dangerous emotions. Just as he is in this. Dangerously passionate. It really was, for me, so far. The height of this almost sick relationship they have. I truely loved. And I know I am not the only one. I can't not wait to see how much more this can progress pass the wonder it already is. I'll catch you over at LJ, hun!
Isa