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for Out of the Silent Planet

by moirasfate

person Sunday
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait, something doesn't make sense.
In chapter 8, at the flashback of Lucius's trial, he is charged with murdering Blaise Zabini. Yet the recent chapter mentions him alive and well.
person hermionebrowneyes
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more great work so will they meet zabian(forgot the spelling) next and can they lern to love and trust again keep up the good work
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FROM THE AUTHOR
I am wondering if anyone reads this besides me?
Anyway, until AFF.net is up and running again, please head to my LJ at: http://ianthe-waiting.livejournal.com/
And to address Sunday's review... I am a dumbass, aren't I? Okay, I'll have to decide what to do...since I killed Blaise in Chapter 8. *shoves head in oven*
Since chapters 15 and 16 are unbeta'd and I cannot access them to give you the beta'd versions...the last chapter will be fixed a bit...in a way it works out for me, because Blaise is not the only character I have planned to show up.
So, please head over to my LJ for updates until AFF.net is up and running again!
Thanks to Sunday for pointing out my AWFUL error...it happens, so please don't hate me too much. Please?
moirasfate.
person Diana
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew, now that was hot. :) I love this story more every time I read a new installment. I'm interested to see what happens at the party and where they'll go from here. Did he heal her leg or just make it easier to move and less painful? I've been wondering about that. Well, either way, keep up the great work.
~Diana
person mid-summer nights
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Draco tenderness! in most of the fics that i have read draco is portrayed as Mr. Cool and "I'm in control of everything" (usually accompanied with his infamous smirk). i'm so glad that draco has an "emotional breakdown", it makes him seem much more human and even more desireable *giggles and blush*. and as far as the arm and the "little voices in his head", is it vulcan's spirit/soul that's infused with the arm? or is the arm just a representation of vulcan? (kind of like the sorting hat is a representation of the founders). Keep it up! i've been pretty busy lately (aren't we all?), but i'll check back when i have the chance to catch up on reading and reviewing.
person Katie
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. god. please tell me there's gonna be some stuff with blaise. because my god i love draco/hermione/blaise. o god if it happens.. i think i'll die. wow.
person Principessa
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another Masterpiece!!!

I cant wait untill they get back to Britain... The story as per usual has me drawn in and showing signs of withdrawl till me next hit. Im sweating, shaking and all weepy... *Dances around with pom pom's and declare's herself as Moira's personal cheerleader*
person rush22
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another fantastic chapter!!! cant wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This fic is just getting better and better! Ic an't wait for more!!
person Lilly
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow..let me say I love you! I didn't expect an update so soon! The chapter is amazing and i am very courious of what will happen when they will be back in britain..and blaise and daphne together.. that reminds me of a very good fiction in the italian fandom called "original sin" that i love very much.
Another little mistake .. it's braccio and not bracchio.. but I think is the same pronunciation thing... i noticed that in the Goblet of fire when harry says " Accio " or when Moody says " Crucio" it souded Assio and Crusio... In latin they are strong " C" and should sound like Accho and Crucho....
Ok sorry for the babbling..and feel fre to correct my english
chu chu
Lilly