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isnt zambini dead?...yeah, lucius killded him...*confused* but i do enjoy this story very much ^^ so please continue and post fasterly! ~squee~

My God. The detail you describe with everything in your writing is utterly amazing. You hooked me in on the first chapter, and I just couldn't stop until I'd read it all the way through to what you have finished so far. It was mind blowing, really. Especially for your first fic, I can't believe it! If you have an update list, I would love to be emailed when the next chapter is finished. I don't know if the site's continuing to do the 'email hidden' thing, but if so, I have an account on here as well. Anyway...uhg..Draco is Amazing. The faults you give to both him and Hermione gives them such a human aspect I've never seen portrayed. It's brilliant. But, ugh...I'll quit rambling. ;o)

yes...yes you will...but lucky for me....there are more chappies to read! *wanders off to read*

Ahhhh, i love it. What more can I say... I hope you post the next chapter very soon!

Excellent all around. Good buildup, good story, good sex.

I love your short story so far, or is it becoming a Novela? I look forward to each new instalment, it is a nice little perk to my busy college double major life. Thank you for shairing such a wonderful talent with everyone. I cant wate to read the next instalment. Great work!

I spent at least three hours last night reading your story from start to finish, I'm now addicted. You must update!

This is one of the best Draco/Hermione fics I've ever read, and trust me- I read lots. ^^
Your writing-style is dark, mature and fascinating, the plot original and intriguing...Really, I love it! The relationship between Draco and Hermione isn't one of those sickeningly sweet romances I don't really fancy....it's obscure and full of shadows...quite interesting!

I only have to do some corrections....
Fabriccio: doesn't exist a name like that. Fabrizio is the correct one.
Pollenta: just one 'l', polenta.
Bracchio: we don't need the 'h', is braccio and braccia is the plural.

Trust me, I know what I'm saying.
I'm Italian. ;)

Well, apart from this little mistakes, I hope you update soon 'cause I'm really enjoying this story! Keep it up.

Laura

WOW.....you're amazing...you update this fast, and your chapters are awesome!!!!!!!!!!
( Never mind that Blasie mistake...it can happen to everyone..:)) Besides this chapter was very,,very intense,...emotional..even romantic in the end...
You know, i'll tell you a secret: i used to read in a very disrespectful way....i simply skip those parts that i'm not interested in..BUT your story made me read every single sentence from the begining. I really love your style of writing, and that you filled the space between book 6 and 7. LOVE you for it!!!!!
Hope you'll update soon......and that everything goes fine..... :))))

Best wishes

This fic really surprised me. I really just read it on a whim, assuming it was one of those dime-a-dozen fics that introduces all these japanese elements because the writer is some kind of hardcore otaku and this reminds them of anime. Usually the result is always just an awkward mess, but that's not the case here. You handled the culture changes very seriously, and I love the chemistry between Draco/Hermione. I think that is how it should be. My only critizism would be that sometimes the story drags and goes into more detail then needed, a minor complaint. Great story!