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for Welcome Back James

by LeoZodiac

person alix
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! I am impressed on the twist you put as to how james is still alive. One thing in the second chapter Sev was thinking about not being able to have more children. But you said something about both he and Lucius being infertile I think you meant to say James but i am not sure. It would make more sense if it was James. Anyway great story I so like the Harry/Draco stories. The ones where Draco is protective but don't make Harry into a wimp. But he will most likely be a bit jumpy after what his uncle did. And Hermione just had to call him a "fag" I do hope they can do something about that. I hope the Weasly's are still ok with him being gay or al least most of them. Update soon
person Sahira
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start..keep updating:)
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy moly! Poor Harry! Can't wait for chapter 2!
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF?! HOW could Hermione DO that to Harry! He WAS the first person to befriend Hemrione! And she KNOWS it! Without Harry, Ron never would have anything to do with Hermione! Since according to Ron, Hermione's a Miss. Little-know-all! As for Fudge-WELL NOW he has a lot of explaining to do to James! Since obviously Fudge either failed to read the records or didn't care!
person BadAss1
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE UPDATE A S P pleasee
person Bella
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooouuuuu it waz jus' gettin guud
person insanedreamer
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooo i like this story..the plot is great..please do continue

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person PJ
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Please do continue *with any of your stories*
person NightOwl
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more, keep going please!
person momoko
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, bye