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for Parts Will Form A Whole

by tamiveldura

person absinthe
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
silly question, of COURSE we want more. You haven't even got to his depthless obsidian eyes or rapier wit yet. We want LOADS more, please.
person lolwow
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Totally love the way you ended chapter 2...that was some how very hot lol And I Love the way you describe everything in such detail...wish your chapters were longer and yes, please, make this is WIP! I can't wait for more!
person libldyjean
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, PLEASE. more, PLEASE. :)
person Emerald Snape
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the writing in story is great... poor Harry... will there be more? I hope so :D
person CMM
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you don't tell me what happens next I'll die. I swear to God.
Please, please, please, PLEASE continue!!!
person vindictum
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please!