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for Hermione the house-elf

by sappysappysappy

person Melissa
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm very, very interested to see where you take this. So, Hermione has house-elf ears? I was confused about that at first (through no fault of yours, though). Did she just have the ears, or was she all house-elf? I'm feverishly hoping this will be a SS/HG romance, since that's my favorite. But no matter what this is, I'll be interested to see what happens next. So please update again as soon as you can!!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Ginger
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somehow this story seems not to belong in this categorie! It should be under drama after my opinion. Even if you make hermione find love and hope in snape, who perhaps even was not really on voldemorts side and was making the best out of the situation he found himself in (or not), I think that would not fit! When I read this story a deep feeling of hate overcomes me ( not for you!!! ), because I would have liked to see hermione stronger, so that she, too, would have rather gone to join her friends in death, than to live such a life. It really seems not worth living and she can acomplish nothing in the position she is in anyway. If you like, I think you should try yourself really at drama. You write very well and are able to evoke strong feelings in the reader!!!
person septentrion
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there's a thing I couldn't make out : has Hermione's appearance completely changed or does she only have house-elf magic and elf-ears ?