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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww cute i hope u update soon!! very soon great story
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm usually not one for time travel stories but i love this one so far and can't wait for more so please hurry fro the sake of my sanity
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing first chapter! Continue the good work and I hope you update soon!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...interesting. You said this would be Severus and Harry...interesting. Huhuhuhu
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In this parargraph:
"It had been Harry, Draco, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione who had defeated the dark lord. The five became inseparable, except when they were off snogging each other. Ron and Hermione were now dating and so were Ginny and Draco. Harry was the only single one of the group because he was too afraid to date anyone incase Voldemort decided to use them to get to him."
Is the Dark lord defeated? Beacause first you said the 5 defeated the dark lord, then you said Harry is afraid to date in case Old voldie gets the them. Do you mean if he comes back to life or what?? I'm just asking because I don't know if Old voldie is alive or not.
Anyway, I really like this chapter, I'm getting into the fic and I hope I see more of it later!! I always love going back in time fics. It's just they way it's written and when Harry has to go to the future again it gets all angsty (my fave!). Sorry about being picky. I just had to say it. It's me.
"It had been Harry, Draco, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione who had defeated the dark lord. The five became inseparable, except when they were off snogging each other. Ron and Hermione were now dating and so were Ginny and Draco. Harry was the only single one of the group because he was too afraid to date anyone incase Voldemort decided to use them to get to him."
Is the Dark lord defeated? Beacause first you said the 5 defeated the dark lord, then you said Harry is afraid to date in case Old voldie gets the them. Do you mean if he comes back to life or what?? I'm just asking because I don't know if Old voldie is alive or not.
Anyway, I really like this chapter, I'm getting into the fic and I hope I see more of it later!! I always love going back in time fics. It's just they way it's written and when Harry has to go to the future again it gets all angsty (my fave!). Sorry about being picky. I just had to say it. It's me.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. I liked it a lot, seems promising.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continue this one, this just may be the best back in time fic ever!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice, slight change in a nice plot. (Plot:Someone goes back in time and falls in love with the younger version of a teacher. etc) But you have five going back and it very nice to know this isn't going to be like the others just by this fact alone. Anyways, please update as soon as you can. No need to rush, but it would be nice to have the next chapter before a month is up (A month, the THE month.)