rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

Never say anything bad about fluff. Fluff is an important part of a balanced reading lifestyle.

Thanks for the fun.

i like it, too bad it doesnt have what happens when hermionie sees snape in her room.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

OMG! I loved it. Spanking, xmas deflowering, all involving Snape. Who could ask for more?

You are so good! I LOVED this!

Macropis: Hey. Yes you are the second person to inform me of this. Sometimes, (quite often actually) the hymen is crescent shaped, so there is an opening even though it is intact So access can be had to the vagina and it still can be taken during penile penetration. I figured I could fall back on that, rather than rewrite the story. Thank you :)

I love your writing so much Ms Figg! So hot-hot-hot and it seems you write unbelievably fast! So, anyway, reading the description of Hermione's deflowering reminded me of something that I have noticed several erotic fiction stories that I have read. The hymen is often described as though it is some kind of barrier partway up inside the vagina. It is not. The hymen is a variably shaped bit of tissue that partially covers the opening of the vagina. It is exterior, not interior. You can see illustrations at the-clitoris.com (not a porn site, I promise! its educational).

You're right,.. it's OOC, but Voldie chokin' on a pheasant bone more than made up for it. Nice tying in with the initial chapters.

Happy Holidays, and what a lovely story! I don't mind him being ooc, he is in all my stories too. LOL I liked all the deity (did I spell that right?) invoking he did. Very creative. I also liked him walking her through everything and how innocent she was. I don't think I've ever seen it done so well. This is one of the best stories I've seen in a long time. Hope to see more of 'em!