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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this makes no sense... i'm sorry, usually I'd try to be more constructive, but i don't even know where to start. i have no idea what's happening in this story...
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's a bit messy but honestly i love it get a beta it will help and please update soon!!!!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I'd like to see more. At some point, you may want to explain why Hermione left the Wizarding world.... and how she is bound to Draco.... Is he just as bound to her?
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! (else I will viciously attack you! lol!)
:) Leeree
:) Leeree
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for an update.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gasp! why does he want her back!?!? update soon please!!!!!!!!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hopefully an update. soon.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is some bad writing how old are you anyways?
-It
-It
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems like the premise is good, but the chapters will have to be longer in order to explain what is going on a bit better. Perhaps you can find a beta, and that person could help you with the nuts and bolts of the story (it's 'veritaserum' for example. You show lots of raw promise.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, but I'm very confused. What happened to putting her in the dungeon? Is Dr. Bottom just a Dr. or is he important? I'm very confused but I like what I do understand. Keep Writing!