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by redclawjbq

person Lady Foxfire
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're a tease! You give us a taste and then make us wait for more. Hopefully you will update soon
person shadow woman
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!
person Abyss
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaii!!! this fic looks promising..^__^.. cant wait till the Harry/Snape part though..hehe..
person jw
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great updfate i cant wait for more
person Hambares
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm ready for the long ride!
person Ari
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, nice one. Just pop Merlin in there when you want to . . . :)
person momoko
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting
person Ditzy
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really good can't wait to read more.
person Liz
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more more more more more MOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEE!!!!!!!

I SOOOO HATE CLIFFIES AND IT WAS JUST GETTING GOOD...

OH I HOPE THIS ISN'T SOME TRICK BY DUMBLEDORK!!!

PLEASE IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT IS HOLY AND UNHOLY....DON'T LET THAT BE THE CASE!!!!!

*coughs daintily* sorry about that....but....I really like this so far....um...i'll just check back later to see if there's more......

Liz
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, good start. I love how this is becoming!!

One thing though, there are some spelling errors I have come across. The first chpater I think had none so far so that's good. You have "wile" which it should have been spelt "while". SOrry I like to be picky ^.^ Great chapter though, I will continue reading this no less!