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for Sanctuary

by PotionsMistressM

person Anon
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Angie30
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so sinfully delicious! Enjoyed it very much,well done my dear!
person kimba6565
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love ur story! I haven't read any good snape/hermione smut in awhile, and yours was very welcome. It reminded me a lot of Roger and Mimi's relationship. You might not be familiar with Rent, but there is actually is a part where Mimi says What are you staring at? And Roger says your hair in the moonlight. I thought it was ironic because I love Rent and Hermione and Snape are my fav couple. No real reason for telling you that, I just thought you'd find it interesting. All in all, I loved your story, and just thought I'd enlighten you.
person a_reader
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, let me be the first :)


I enjoyed this glimpse at a post-HBP relationship. Not sure if you mentioned whether it is a one-shot or something more, but I think it's strong enough to stand on its own. You've hit the right tone of voice for a girl this age, although she strikes me as slightly more American-sounding than one would expect. I do think we'd see a little more stress coming from him, since it seems he's found his way out of desperation to Harry Potter's best friend, regardless of whether he's harbored feelings for her.


All the same, I thought it was rather sweet, and sexy as well. :)
person angel
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i wish you would go on i would love to read how harry would act ... if not .. it was a great .. in till next time later for now

angel