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by Doppleganger

person xchaosx
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. I mean when I hear stuff about sick and twisted, I think stuff about rape and such, which doesn't bother me to read about, but haha, I wasn't expecting this. I'm suprised, a little sad to hear Harry, Ron and such were sacrificed as well.

I'm a little confused as to how Hermione got them in the dishwasher. Or was it just their heads in there?
Anyways, I liked the ending very much, how Draco said he was proud of her, it will be VERY interesting to see where this heads.
:D Update soon!
person KyleBroflovsiRules(2lazy1login)
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOHH! I love the start of this. Very dark. I love the touch with the dishwasher. Very cool. And Hermione on the dark side. Awesome. I WANT MORE!!
person LaLa
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Boy, I think that I just lost my apitite. You have a VERY dark mind >-D

person Melissa
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The rating should definitely be higher. I know that you warn people that your story isn't for the faint of heart, but that could mean so many different things and you might wanna give more of a clue in your summary concerning the horror aspect of your story. I didn't really know what I was getting myself into.
person Elmo
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have the chills...*shudder*

points for originality

wow....dark...very very dark....

bit OOC.....

hmmm....*shudder*
person Leila
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is very OOC characterization of Hermione's parents, in the books they were supportive of her. where is this going? Why are Hermione & Malfoy so OOC? Hmmm.....
person moi
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chilling...would have been more so if she hadn't put her parents in the dishwasher? - slightly comical. The rest was very good
person southern cross
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
see now that is what i love! something totally different. complete darkness and such a great twist. i loved this.
~Sara
person kat
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. continue please!
person Evil Saint
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, if shock value was what you were going for, then I suppose congrats are in order. All I can say is, UP THE RATING... Damn