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by bourbonrain

schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm blown away. I've been sifting through a ton stories over the past week, reading quite a few sub-standard ones I may add, and this is by far the best piece of fiction I've seen in a long while. I only barely understood the Draco/Ginny pairing before reading this, and now I feel like I should be shipping it. You capture the emotion of loss and need so brilliantly. Thank you. Thank you so much for making it possible for me to read this, and please continue! I'm totally willing and ready to beta, spell-check, you name it.

Sincerely yours,
AW
person Lenuca
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update! it's a shame that such a great story won't have an ending
person BekkahJ
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I've already asked this - but please will you keep this story going??
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....this fic is intense. But I hope not over! It's wonderful, you write with such a mature style, Bourbonian, which is a change. Pleaseplease don't let it be over....Onward!
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As much as I wanted to read on I was loath to, as I knew it would have to end. Please write more soon.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, I love it! It is hard to find a decent story with character depth... lots of it. You have room to work with, I cant wait for more! I hope there's more!
person Marie1
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it very much and hope to see an update soon
person LilyLady
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story, I really enjoy it. Although I'm a major Harry/Ginny shipper overall, this story seems so real (and in a good way!) I'm quite impressed. You have a *few* grammatical problems, but nothing terrible (trust me...bad grammar can REALLY ruin a story!)
I read DaisyMae's review, and I think they were a little too harsh. Ok, a LOT too harsh. This really is great, and very impressive. As I said, a few grammatical errors, but nothing like where they were going - and as far as having sex before, I don't really care if you have or not, you write it well. Keep up the good work. (And if you do decide you want a beta, I'd be glad to help you out!)
person enticing
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. The characters are very "themselves" (if that makes sense) and the whole thing reads nicely, grammer and spelling-wise. The one thing I would caution is not to let the Draco/Ginny relationship become too repetitive or stagnent. Try to continue to keep moving it forward, after all, you've got a whole year to cover! Overall, the plot is good, and I'm definatly going to continue reading! Good job.
person Apocrypha
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, I love the storyline xD!