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for A Debt Repaid

by minkajane

schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story I enjoyed every minute of it. I've enjoyed all your tales so far. One question where's the Phantom Story? You know you want to. All right talk to you later jamila.
person Steve
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I preface this saying I know nothing about Harry Potter or any of the characters. That being said I did enjoy this adult fiction very much. It was fun and easy to read, but hot at the same time. It had a very nice story to hold the sex, which was very intense to say the least. It tapped into sex in many different ways (m-f, f-f, m-f-f) and did it all very well.
person Setius
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well Done!!
I loved it, it really made me question the whole theory of dominatrix. I really look forward to looking into it. I loved the way you described the sex and the cruelness of the mistress. you described the sex perfectly. My only bit of advice would be to add a little more detail.
person DarlaPugger
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just...wow. It was strange, but good. Just...H/Hr?? No way.
person stacy
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story was awsome. it made me so horny. i started to touch myself
person Moi
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Cough*

Holy...

Wow...

Damn...

Wow...

Do you have any relation to God?

Dude...

Wow...

Here's my idea: You write a lot more down and make it into a book and then sell it on the black market to avoid copyright laws. I would so walk down a dark ally to buy it.
person Lang
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weee
person jason!
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! i likes this soo much i Favorated it >.> i liked it all up untill the last chapter i dont like harry too much,or ron! they are icky! so the last chaper was dissapointing! im just not gayaphobic!...weird anyway! MORE! now ! or ill turn you in to a muffen and feed you to a snake!
person DarkDemonGurl
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Wow.. update soon Please
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello. love the story. can't wait for the next chapter. most people wouldn't agree with this idea, but u should have a foursome with hermione, anna, harry, and ron. and if u want to, you could throw snape into the mix to. it'd be interesting. especially with harry and snape. just think of the reviews you'd get.