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by avari20

person nina
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey just wanted to pay well earned respect to your storie
it is very good indeed and it had me l.m.a.o
its very good like i said i hope you right more than just one more chapter, i know ill read it
love it
person Amber
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter to come even though it will be the last...
person joanna
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! I love it! I love everything about it! The idea, the plot, the events, and even the pairings!
person Sarah
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
person Amethystique
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! I've waited a lifetime for this update and now I need the conclusion so I can start from the beginning again to read it all the way through. HG/DM is not my favourite ship but this fic is definately my fave HG/DM story EVER! Blessings ; )x
person siren_acid
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this fic, fantastic! Your pairings are amazing and the way the story comes together is well wow, it has to be one of my favorites. come on come on please post again, I was so happy to see the new chapter. Bravo, carry on with the great work
person Malinda
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be the funniest fic I have ever read! Between Malfoy's 'lists', his making of mental notes, and his straying, random thoguhts, I am dying of laughter! When I read the part where Draco said that he was going to shake Hermione until the shrinking charm on her teeth wore off, I thought I was going to pee my pants!Your knowledge of little facts (in the Harry Potter books) is really good. *WARNING: constructive criticism ahead* I've found a few mistakes that I wanted to share...#1 Near the beginning of the story, you refer to Voldemort as a muggle-born, which he is not. Muggle-borns have muggles for both parents (i.e. Hermione). Voldemort is a half-blood (Merope, his mom, was a witch) and his father was a muggle. #2 Your descriptions when it comes to Ick are way off. Unless Draco is 12 feet tall, there is no way Ick (at 3 years-old) could stand no higher than his knee (chapter 1), and do you realize that Ick was 'alive' for 48 hours before Draco changed her diaper? I have 2 kids and from experience, I can tell you 1 year-olds need to be changed every 2-3 hours. And how long was it before Hermione finally fed the poor girl??? I just thought that since you are writing your story based around a child as the main theme, you should have done a bit more research. Oooh, that sounded harsh, sorry. I really do love your story, though. It's hilarious!!!
person adrienne
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! Really only one chapter left :( I love this story. Can't wait for more either way, but I wish it would go on. More soon please!
~Adrienne
person Reamar
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like thiss very much. Pleasse update ssoon.
person rayn
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SHIT!@_@
now thats why i love draco fanfics