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by avari20

person Bekkah
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey - I just found your story and i really luv it!!! The reactions of the characters were great - luv how scared some of theguys have been! Im really liking Pansy too. Please please please keep writing!! I really wanna know what happens!!!
person Sarah
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hiya. i just read your story and i love it. its funny yet sad at the same time and i love your portrayal of draco...and ick is a BABE aw shes such a sweetie.
sarah xx
person tank
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this sort of stuff is the same shit that makes the grinch's heart 3 times bigger! this stuff is very readable and i never get sick of reading it over and over.......its lovely and cheeky at the same time and somehow you've managed to incorporate massive sadness into the plot like in chapter 14 and then bring the tone back to a humorous playful affair! Bravo !
person carabella
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story. i was sooo sad when u stopped writing it 4 a while, but very happy when u began again! so keep it up
person firewall
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You will never really understand the excitement I felt when I saw a new chapter had been posted!! Thank you, thank you, thank you! And what a great chapter it was!
person Dani
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, wow! That story was so amazing... If you don't continue soon, you're dead.
person linoy
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love i't u have to continue...
person linoy
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love i't u have to continue...
very beautiful :) :D XD
person linoy
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love i't u have to continue..
very beautiful :) :D XD
person Llnadraecia
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must have more! please keep writing.