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for Future Parents Program

by avari20

person Daniel
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful chapter. I hope the next chapter will be soon too.
Thank you for taking my comment seriously! and thanks for letting me know about updating, I hoep you will be doing so in the future too.
"Someone who had apparently never seen a hairbrush before the Yule Ball and from the looks of it had managed to lose it again immediately following. " that was priceless just like the last 3 paragraphs, so Draco's mom going to sponser the program or something like that?
Cheers
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it.
person Loz
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a great start. I can't want to see what happens weldone :D
person angel
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i really really like you story please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
person Kenda
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you've got me intrigued so please don't stop there!
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool Story. Too funny for words. I just have to put this one under my faves. Anyway, update soon. You have one heck of a sence of humor.
person kit
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! The summary made me laugh because it seemed like such an original idea, keep it up!
person Tammatha
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am liking it,,,I don't think I have seen a plot line like it before,,,looking forward to reading more..
person cindy
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story you definetly have to update this one
you r doing such a good job with this story
person Kristal
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOoOoO...
please update!!
all i can say is i am def. liking what i have read so far!!
oh and if isnt to much of a bother, would you kindly email me when you do update?? :)
"pretty pretty please with a cherry on top?"
my email address is: Kristal_cerveja@Hotmail.com
k thnx
bye
Kristal