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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this sounds interesting keep it goinng im very interested
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cool start. cannot wait for more!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue, your story is so wonderful. I love the babies hint! When is hermione showing up?
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
at first i didnt think i would enjoy this story because of the summary. however i started reading and i really do like it. i can not wait for the next update.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep updating so far so good!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start!
You idea is so original!
You idea is so original!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet lol cool
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Prologue - Terrific beginning! I was looking for a new Hr/Dr to read and this one has definitely made it to my list!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sucks that you started with the ending...
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I rarely review, but this sounds interesting.
Unlike the other reviewer, I don't think doing Italics is necessary, you did have at the top that this chapter is the prologue.
Now I'm really interested because Vivica is only 3, and the program started 5 years previously, so... did Dumbledore hand off those terrible -screaming plastic babies like they do at some high-schools?
Unlike the other reviewer, I don't think doing Italics is necessary, you did have at the top that this chapter is the prologue.
Now I'm really interested because Vivica is only 3, and the program started 5 years previously, so... did Dumbledore hand off those terrible -screaming plastic babies like they do at some high-schools?