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by avari20

person cruttan
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A kindred spirit! I love the tone of your writing. I'm a big fan of the humor, and you've got it in spades. "Ick" is adorable, and the nickname is hilarious. Not to mention the fact that the idea of Draco with a tiny daughter (bearing a striking resemblance to himself) is enough to win me over just by itself.

And the hairbrush comment! It killed me! I am quite enamored with Draco's inner monologue. His observations on the Golden Trio are lovely. ;)

I am only through the first couple chapters, just wanted to let you know how much I was enjoying it!
person liz
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh thanks for the email OF COURSE I WANTED TO KEEP ON READING ^_^ heck i even signed on soo i could keep track.. thats soo funny!! lol do continue asap!!
person heather
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! I can't wait for your next chapter! And I dont recognize the male character paired with Cho, it is late though so i might not be thinking straight, so maybe you should just make up a character. it'd be easier to make them work well together.
person lizzy69
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh do continue asap... as i told u i signed up lol.... u have sum hilarious lines hahaha props to u
person meg20
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story; that is a nice thought!!!
person Blazing Fire
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could always use the old stand by of Lavander Brown, but if you want to use a Hufflepuff of their year, you could always make up your own character. I don't know much about that house.
person liz
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe i wonder what her reaction will be uuuuuu goody do continue asap!
person liz
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dec 28? nice laterz!!
person darian
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's great you update quickly and the story so far sounds great. The humor it on point and can I say poor poor Ron ...I never did like pansy!
person anon
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
See that everyone? I'm bright and sharp-eyed :0). How about Hannah Abbott or Lisa Turpin (those are the only ones I can think of seeing as how it's nearly 3 in the morning)