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by avari20

person E
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this has got to be one of the best/funniest Hermione/Draco story I've read yet. I love the plot and I especially love how you've written the characters. It's got just the right amount of angst and humor mixed together to make the plot be really good. Oooer, I can not wait to read more about the parent program. Are they actually going to have to have children, or are the just going to get some magicked baby? Seriously, a really awesome story. Keep on writing!!!
E
person Blipo
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving it so far! please update soon
person Erin
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow. I LOVE THIS STORY! You are an amazing writer. The idea for this story is so different from most of the stories I've read before. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to find out what happens! I worship you and this story. *bows down* Ahahahaha.
person Lauren
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AhhhhH!!!!! I LOVE it!!!! Can't wait to read more!
person sailormoonhannah
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you ROCK!!!
person Ada
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heya,

i've decided that i shall try to be a faithful reviewer ^^. So in response to the past four chapters i have to say that it's EXTREMELY good!! you have a wonderful knack for humor. I loved reading what Narcissa did to Draco, she is both creative and crafy and i think you captured it well ^^

As for you prefered Major....you have a great talent in writing according to what i've read so far...maybe you should consider doing more english...lol you'd beat everybody in scrabble *winks*

anyway...lol i look forward to your next installment...(hopefully it is soon...i keep comming on to check and get dissapointed and hopeful all at the same time when i don't see an update)

Ada

PS- I'm a romance junkie too, so i look forward to your own style ^^ keep the smut comming! *winks*
person KageMage15
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd this si going to kick so much ass, I cant belive that this is the 1st fanfiction that you have ever written. But goddess knows you have a natural talent. So please oh please use it well and often ^^
person Sami
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually one to review, but this story has a great beginning. I love it! This is definetly one to bookmark!

Sami
person Ella
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god your replacing Cho. I hate her so much. I'm not sure why but i do. Anyway this is really good so far and i know your taking your time but thats not needed for you to produce a good chapter. Any who I love it. and Draco is reminding me a lot of Stewie from family guy.
person myself
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh i kno its christmas and all but do try to update! i love this story! its soo original!

great job