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by avari20

person Jake the snake
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love you story! I like the idea where Draco like Hermione before hand and Hermione doesn't like him. I personaly do that in a few of my stories but enough about me this is about you! How did you get the idea for this story? I think you should make it a challenge. Please update as soon as you can!

Vic

BTW Draco is sexy times 100000000
person Karen
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now you've definitely caught my interest. Humorous fluff is reasonably entertaining, but now you've handed us a mystery in what happened to Hermione. Sneaky of you! ;-)
person Experience My Dreams
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far I can't wait for the next chapter!!
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really great. I love that you're showing more than just one side of Hermione. One thing confused me, though. The part where she was swimming and everything confused me. It seemed like it just came out of nowhere. It was fine, but I think that you could have maybe transitioned it a little more clearly. Other than that, amazing story. I can't wait for more.
person Melissa
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sweet and wonderful! I particularly like the interaction between Draco and Dumbledore- so funny! Please update soon!
person apple_blossum
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post more soon.. I love seeing Draco tortured... draco is the best character and you write him well. I eagerly await an update
person Chavela
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had my stereo playing when I started to read this chapter. I was surprised to find the song I was listening to played on perfect time with this chapter. The song 'Poetry Kit' fit it while i was listening. This chapter to me was very poetic. The last part with Draco under water was very slow drifting into it. I loved it. That part was one of the best parts of a story I have read in a while. I really love how this story is plying out. Every chapter keeps me wanting more and with each one that comes, I am far from beong disappointed. I love every single one that comes up. I can't wait to see what happens next.
PEACE Isa
person mstrsofmayhm
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahahahahaha. I can't believe Draco doesn't know how to swim. And I like that, because it shows that Draco isn't 'all that'. I really liked the start of your story, with Draco, his daughter, and this mysterious program. You have no idea how badly I want you to continue with this story. I loooove it.
person Daniel
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Kristal
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!
OMG you cant leave the story like that!! AH!!
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP
There were only three people in the world who truly understood the extent of Hermione