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by avari20

person Ivy
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I am hooked. Can't wait to see where you take us next, please, please, please keep updating!
person firewall
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew there were a couple of things I wanted to question...will we find out why Hermione couldn't sit all the way back on her seat on the Hogwarts Express? Hermione and Dumbledore have aluded to what she experienced in the war, am I correct in assuming we will be filled in eventually?

I'm not expecting you to reply to these questions, I only pose them in case they offer you possible avenues to explore since they interest your readers.

person Geraldine
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your writing style... it makes the story flow really well. hope you update soon. good job.
person Donavon.
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a brilliant plot. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Update is needed soon. Please.
person Ada
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done ^^ bravo!! But not to be morbid or anything but are we going to get to see more of what happened to Hermione during the war?

lol and i think draco is going to learn to swim here very quickly if he wants to breath...

lol now hurry up and work on chapter 5!! lol *winks*

Ada
person ccrawley
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story and looking forward to more. Thanks.
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schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person jen
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it. aboslutly love it. pleasssseee update!!!!!
person Bek Allen
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No... No no! Ooooh... That was really evil of you to leave it where you did at the end of chapter five. I was all engrossed and getting ready to click onto the next chapter... and there was none!

Chapters 4 and 5 were abso-freakin-lutely brilliant! I have never laughed so hard in my entire life. Honestly. "Traitorous Transfigurations Professor". LoL.

I like how you've jaded Hermione. The majority of fics have her all bubbly and happy and glowy (my own included - but that's cos I'm terrified of messing it up), and it is great to see her a little different. I love the interaction between the professors. Especially Snape. "Exactly what house were you in Albus?" *snerk*. Please, please update soon. I'm really familiar with the Future Parents Program.. my High School had one and I can't wait to see how this all works out... (Bonus points for sticking Ron and Pansy together though, that was brilliant in and of itself. :) )

Please update soon! I'll beg if need be.

Bek
person Afrodite
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do believe that this story is deliciously amazing, you got me hooked :) Up date when you can!