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by avari20

person Sarah Cox
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I decided to give this story a try despite my initial misgivings when I read the summary the first few times I saw it posted. Then like any good story I read I got sucked into it and spent the last few days reading it whenever I could. Now that I've reached the end I feel something akin to what you feel. Happiness that all the characters got their happy ending and the satisfaction that comes after reading a good story (or writing one), but also sadness that it's really over. So, needless to say (but I'm saying it anyway) I thought your story was damn good. It was beautiful, romantic, humorous, suspenseful, heart rendering, well thought out and expertly written. I was slightly dissapointed there was no actual sex but I can understand why you chose not to include any. Plus, considering I didn't really notice the lack of sex until after I'd finished the story, it was obviously unnecessary. There are very few stories here that can hold my attention and not include sex, so I must say good show. Good show indeed.
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absoublty LOVED THE ENDING! I atually cried. In pain and Profession, something bothered me. You said something about Ick being offered to a pagan sacrifice. I am a pagan, and it's insulting how you mae pagans look like people who sacrifice babys. Although I still don't have children, I know that no one sacrifices their children.
person Lrndng
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad its over .... but it was an awesome awesome story
person Frolicker Bliss
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love you.

Amazing. Basically the only word that I can use to describe your stories. I was so excited yesterday when I saw the update, and surprised, my jaw dropped. Considering my memory, which sucks, I started to read the story over to prepare for the ending. Honestly, after all the times I've read it over, it never fails to make me smile, I especially like the first chapter and how you displayed Ick. Of course, I died a little when I couldn't finish it last night, but I just did, and AMAZING.

Always coming back for more,
FB
person Jess
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! I love the way you write. The storyline was fantastic. Kudos! Simply amazing. Keep up the great work!
person Sessh's Sango
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say that I absolutely love it. I haven't read the last bit of the last chappie but I know that it'll be really really good. Thanks for a wonderful story and please right more... (preferably Draco/Hermione pairings in long stories but I'll be happy with Harry/Hermione lol)
person blueankh
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your story for such a long time and I am so glad that it you finished it. This story was really really well written and one of the best and humorous Draco/Hermione stories I have ever read. Keep writing, you are a wonderful writer, thank you so much for the story. :D
person Koppe
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly loved it... would very much like a sequel -- perhaps of Ick and Ack (and the other couples children) starting Hogwarts, and perhaps a bit about Hermione's parents and the children.
The only thing I was slightly miffed about, was that you had kille-off Crookshanks...
Thanks for a great story,
-Koppe
person Bambu
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on finishing your story. It's utterly charming ... and has several unforgettable moments. Ick and Ack for one!
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
absolutely wonderful. i loved every minute of it. EVERY MINUTE.